i just wrote these. please note that i am very tired and have a really
bad headache so i tried my best with these.
it's been a while since i've written somethin,
it got hard at a time that i wished it wasnt.
i felt a sting, but i just thought i got hit with somethin.
so i just let it go, and it grew into pain from hits and punches.
it's sorta touchy, so can we talk about a different subject?
like how my family said they love us, but i get nothin from it.
sick of the drama, but i loved every minute of it,
we didnt speak, i loved how i wasnt distant from it.
but i grew tired, so i couldnt sit and love it.
now i over look it all, like i sit above it.
u said it was all good, im thinkin different of it,
cuz the whole time i fed it, i was missin somethin.
that somethin happens to be a piece of mind.
i ignored everyone who said "have a piece of mine."
im not too fond of borrowing other people's time,
cuz i want my own. if i dont say it, then you see the signs.
dang that's from deep down,
i aint talkin crap, so you dont have to put the seat down.
mind wide open, thats how it should be.
but screw opinions and dont tell me how i could be.
cant keep my eyes open, tired as ever.
spreadin like a forest fire, im on fire forever.
hope i receive what i deserve, steady antenna,
cuz i got my hopes high, so im not ready for 'never'.
would you say i have potential to be something? are these lyrics
great, good, ok, bad, or other? thank you for your answers in advance.
ok i really dont care how it rhymed, that really shouldnt even matter.
the important thing that should matter is the subject matter. there
are plenty of rappers who use the same words to rhyme, and yea i know
i did, but i used different words before them to create the same sound
like "hit with somethin" and "missin somethin" and "written somethin".
and you only read one of my raps and you say i suck? this isnt my only
one, and i admit, it wasnt my best either. thanks for your answer
though.
oh and sorry it was boring for u. i guess it could be one of those
tracks that people listen to and could just chill to if i extend on
it, put a hook on it, and get a nice mellow beat with it. lol it
really wasnt meant for people to jump around to or bump in a club,
sorta just for me to vent right now. i really didnt care how it came
out for some reason, i had a lot of little things to get off my chest
and i think i accomplished that. thanks for answering tho.
