Does this song sound any good to u ?

I would ask my friend but I'd be way to embarrassed so plz just tell
me if u like it I mean I know it's not the greatest I just came up
with it in like an hour because I got bored at church and just thought
about
Ps- I'm only 12
Ok here it is

please let me give you one last dance in hopes that youll give me
another chance so i can show u i love u and show u i still care ill
never leave u i know thats not fair i just want u to know ill always
be there. i promise to follow u until the end of time u are always
gonna be mine because u are my only one and your smile it shines
brighter than the morning sun i need u to know im sorry i said those
things to u because now i know that my words were like a gun and they
wounded u so thats why im asking u to give me this one last dance in
hopes that u will give me just one more chance to show u i love u and
show u i care ill never leave u i know thats not fair an ill aleays be
there.